Well I didn't understand what the advice you tried to give me and if I keep on adjusting it, even if I didn't understand, I would never been finished. Sadly, I think my insight in English still isn't good, I think.
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Very nice, man! Only one thing, why you don't make solid pannels? with Boundaries/limits. I think will look more... tight. The page have a lot of blank space and areas with text and art getting mixed. I have the same problem too. One way is making the text bubbles in the rough phase. But it's very good! It's marvelous how you make the characters with a really sharp anatomy!
Your comic is great! Are you going to make more episodes?
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pheraps the first baloon of the last panel is futile: we no need the explication of the humor joke of the previous panel, i think...
better a "DAMN!", or something like that
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Change! Getter one!!
I love you YT....
<3 <3 <3
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I proudly present Chuckism's from the ChuckNorrisFacts.com as featured by the Oregonian Newspaper article called the Edge; today's Ism is:
Q: How many Chuck Norris's does it take to change a lightbulb?
A: Trick question, there is only one Chuck Norris
But it's very good! It's marvelous how you make the characters with a really sharp anatomy!
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Watch your thoughts; they become your words
Watch your words; they become your actions
Watch your actions; they become your habits
Watch your habits; they become your character
Watch your character; it becomes your destiny
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