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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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For starters, you do a FANTASTIC job of drawing Francesca here. She's huge, yet her outfit renders her adorable, especially with the bows and the way she does her hair. I think the shading is also top notch and works well with the cartoony style you've achieved. Everything looks well and in place as a drawing.
What's unclear to me is that it seems like there's a story here that I can't figure out. Francesca's very angry face contrasts with what looks to be a normally pleasant and cheerful outfit, and for some reason she is upset with Mickey. We have very little clues to puzzle out why she's acting this way to Mickey, and Mickey's expression, while also good, doesn't give us much to go on either.
I think you could have a lot of reasons to have Francesca get upset during a visit to Disney World and have a reason to berate the much smaller mouse, but the lack of clear storytelling in the picture is why I'm confused. It might even be solved with a dialogue balloon or something else in the picture that lets us know why she's upset.
Aside from that, great pic! Another finely done muscle drawing.
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